evaluation

Evaluation

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final magazine - (front page, double-page spread and contents page)

front page final

double-page spread final

contents page final

unfinished and finished contents pages

This is the unfinished version of my contnts page.

This is my final contents page.

double page spread: first draft

this does not work as it is too simple and boring. i am going to redo my layout completely and use a different style of background as nothing much is going on.

used and unused images

Feedback

Kelvin you have made very good progress with all aspects of the foundation production. Your front page looks impressive and is a significant improvement on the first version.
You should now aim to continue your running commentary of work in progress with your contents and main article pages. Include screen shots of various stages of the construction of these pages. You should also upload your original photographs used and any that were rejected.

development of front page

this i what i started with in my front page.

this is what the final front age looked like. i changed the background colour from black to a light lilac one to math the complection of his skin. also having a black background made hat colour too stand out and it stopped it from presenting D-Gun as the focla poitn of the page.